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PostSubject: Saiyajin Yuuki Lime   Sat Aug 07, 2010 3:00 pm

- Edited today, August 8th 2010. -

Name: Yuuki Lime

Yuuki = Japanese for courage
Lime = Just as the citrus fruit

Nickname (if applicable): Lime

Age: 29

Species: Saiyan, Len type.

Homeplanet: Neo Vegeta

Family:
Biological Father: Saiyan Orenji
Biological Mother: Saiyan Yuzu
Adoptive Father: Saiyan Yuuki Fleck
Mate: Saiyan Solon Albinor.

Eyes: Electric Lime colored. He usually wears a neutral expression.

Height: 6'11''

General Appearance: Lime is tall and buff, having really long red hair, reaching almost his knees, but which he ties on a high ponytail. A huge lock of hair covers his right eye, and his tail has red fur. Lime wears Saiyan armor, as well as some clothes based on Earth's traditional japanese when he's on rest. He liked this style when reading the books brought by Bulma and the rebellious group to Neo Vegeta.

Mental Level and Personality: Smart, and wise, despite his age. He's silent, and only talks when necessary. That's a double edge weapon against himself since he tends to restrain himself emotionally, causing that he can/could snap suddenly, and certainly, nobody would want to be close to him. He loves to watch, study and know the enemy, before planning how to defeat him. He also reads a lot, and he knows many languages from around the universes. This thirst of knowledge was "discovered" by the heads of the Rebellion movement, so he is considered as a good member of the force. Loyal, confident, honest, those are a few of his characteristics. By some earthlings, Lime is defined as the perfect samurai.

Abilities: Ki, swordplay (proficiency with katana-style weapons), hand to hand combat.

Weapon(s) of Choice: His main weapon is a long sword (nodachi) named Subaru-hime which he got from an old earthling man member of the Rebellion, who taught him the basics of the way of the samurai. The sword has a cutting edge of 135.6 cm (it was 145.8, but he had an "accident with it", so the scabbard is too much longer than the sword could be) and a curvature of 4.9 cm. The width of the blade at the base is 7.2 cm and the width near the tip is 3.0 cm. (Facts from a real Nagayoshi sword).

Someone could believe that he is a bad melee fighter, but that's wrong. He practiced hand-to-hand combat as all saiyans, allowing him to defend himself with it. He has Ki control too.

Occupation: [Don't know, I need help from the admins, LOL]

Background: The Len-Saiyans are a strange but interesting group in Saiyan Culture. Starting just as any other family on Neo Vegeta, Onion and his family were thinking only on revenge. But how could them contribute to the cause? long before the planet was destroyed, and based on Tuffle technology, he was always looking for ways to always impress his king by innovating on his family's techniques and abilities to develop their tasks which oftenly were over intelligence and spying over new planets, collecting information against the Icejin (being Onion a soldier who helped Vegeta Senior with the revolt against Frieza), being of course, one of the few survivors to the destruction of their homeplanet, saving the base of his life research.

Offering himself and his mate as a test subjects for DNA manipulation experiments over their "bloodthirsty" gen, the LEN gen, and the doctors performed tests in for enhancing their senses. Their bodies, as a result of the continued experiments, suffered from drastic changes in their physical appearance, causing them to have hair color in red tones (red, purple, brown, to tell a few) and their eyes based on green colors. At the beginning, the other saiyans didn't like so much the physical changes, as they broke the usual "dark eyes, dark hair" rules, but with time, they were acknowledged, but recognized as a different specie of Saiyan.

Because of this physical changes, and due to the use of Tuffle technology, the first king of New Vegeta ordered Onion to never use their rules to name Len children, and that's why he and his mate had to used the Tuffle way for naming their offspring. His sons Lime and Pomelo, and their daughter Berry, were the first ones named after this new "tradition". So many years of pretty good works performed helped the Len to be common in Saiyan race, but even with it, their population is small. Just a 3/100 relation.

Lime's father is a descendant from Lime's (Onion's first boy) line, and his mother from Pomelo's line, so the day he was born, his parents decided to honor the most notable and powerful warrior of the Len by naming their son like that. That's how, he was born. Sadly, both Yuzu and Orenji were killed in action while performing some intellicence mission inside the Ice-jin empire for the Saiyan Rebellion, and then, their friend Fleck Yuuki, was designated to raise the boy under his care. Growing up now in another family, but still in the middle of the Rebellion cause, he knew everything about it and since he had use of reason he joined the ranks, managing to get some missions on his youth ages to find allies, eventually landing on Earth. Having news of an earthling traitor working for the Icejin empire, Lime had to travel around Earth looking for him, meeting on the way an old man called Nagayoshi, Fleck's contact on Earth (and on Capsule Corporation), from who he learned basic earthling culture and the basics as well of famous way of the samurai. When he entered the army, he was trained for combat, which made a good balance with his prior formation on New Vegeta.

After Earthlings joined the Rebellion movement, he got tons of information about Earth traditions, as well as information about weaponry, martial arts, heroes, and more of what he wanted, the way of the Samurai. His talent found by Capsule Corporation for memorizing important data and quickly learning new languages after a few lessons became a good weapon to the Rebellion cause. Sadly, by that time, Lime had been suspended by killing another saiyan soldier due to personal problems. After being contacted by the high ranks, and a session with King Vegeta himself, Lime managed to get his expedient deleted, and allowed to come back to the ranks, where he still works until today.

Love Life/Relationships: Lime is bisexual. His first romantic relationship was with a Saiyan female. But, he ended up mating with another male, Solon.

Lime from the Len Saiyan and Solon from the Albi Saiyan met when they were cubs thanks to their families interaction. Their relationship by those years, was some sort of "brotherly love", but Lime's determination of growing strong led him away from his best friend when he entered the Army, hence, the Rebellion. Solon followed him, and their paths crossed many times, until they were full mature saiyans. One of Solon's crew mates, Lyon, tried to take advantage of him, which made Lime snap and take justice on his hands, killing the Saiyan soldier and making him be expelled from the Army for a long time. That time, he used it to formalize a family with Solon, claiming him as a mate and forming a family. Both haven't decided yet to procreate or such.

Lime doesn't flirt with people. He's too responsible with his job, so some people might try to mess with him about that. He can play too but, on his mind is always his mate.

Random Information:

He speaks many languages due to his studies and work as a translator for the Saiyan Army.
He likes meditating.
He "hums" a lot. Like he always thinks before speaking.
Just speaks the necessary.
Loves to dress in green tones and in leather brown/black.
Loves Earthlings' Way of the Samurai.
Dresses according to ancient japanese tradition from Earth.
It's too respectful of laws and hierarchy.

RP Sample:

- The steady chirping of agitated avians echoed across the forest, mixing in with the softness that the waterfall gifted the area. That black haired Saiyan sat silently on a flat rock, just above water level, the peacefulness of his surrondings lost on him. Meditation was never his strong suit, Kakarotto and Yuri had that market cornered. It didn't stop him from trying, however. Wearing loose Kanyon: black pants, and nothing else, his forearms rested on folded legs, glacier hues hidden from the world as the wind rushed over his form, making black tresses sway within natures caresses. His shoulders rose and fell steadily with his breaths, envisioning a key object in his mind, and focussing on key words. Peace. Solitude. Fuck. His eyes slowly opened, glacier hues going towards the waterfall itself as a palm came up, supporting his chin as he leaned into it. He'd have no peace here. At least he didn't have to deal with Chikyuu-jin. A defeated sigh was heard as he rolled forward, easing into a one handed stand, holding his body up with fingers as he slowly started lifting himself up and down. His meditation had turned to training. How typical. -

Way down by the river, another being was deep in thought. His tail resting over his lap, Lime was trying to focus on the sound of the water passing by for being able to meditate, but the thud of a fruit falling to the fruit and then the sound of parakeets interrupting his session, making him snort in slight annoyance. He hadn't been able to do a proper mental training in days, so again, he would have to rely on physical activity again. Standing up and looking for the best place to use his full agility and his sword techniques, the red haired Len walked against the river's direction. Random sounds and chirping, and the water moving, pointing that the waterfall was close was everything he could heard, until slowly, figure was turning visible on his eyes. Lime stopped suddenly, tightening the grip on his sword as he stared in direction of the waterfall as, close to it someone doing, apparently, exactly what he wanted to do. Moving a bothersome lock of hair, the Len slowly walked toward him, waiting to see if the other could acknowledge his presence.

- His eyes had remained closed until felt the presence of the other, glacier hues opened, observing the other as he remained upside down for a moment. That's how out of it he was, it'd taken him this long to sense him. He allowed his legs to drop, bare feet touching the stone as he righted his posture, cold orbs staring at the other silently. Red hair, a tail, and a sword. - Saiyan? My day keeps going like this, and maybe I'll actually complete what I came here for. - The wind rushed over his form once more, the cloth of his pants billowing against his legs as he grinned, those two long bangs which hung down in front of his visage moving somewhat. He grinned, which was never a good thing. - Coming here with a weapon. Hope you know how to use it. - With his last word, that blue aura flared to life around him, the water around the rock he'd been standing on being pushed away by the pressure of his ki, the rock itself slowly cracking before it finally fell apart, falling to the bare water bed underneath his now floating form, that necklace around his neck almost floating against his chest as that aura pulsed healthily around him. -

Recognizing the other's tail as well, he immediately knew that he couldn't avoid this gold chance of having some of action, before going back home. Hitting something - or someone, in this case - was pretty much better than just hitting air, trees and water. "Len Saiyan." Watching over the other's ki as he made the rock crush into nothing more than dust, Lime tightened the grip on the scabbard, while the other one grabbed the long sword by the handle. Crouching, and adopting his battle stance, the Len powered up, white and blue ki blaring around his form, his hand moving to pull out the sword a few centimeters out of its protector, just waiting for the other's move to fight back. His expression didn't show any anger nor fear. He was just waiting for the incomming attack.

Len-Saiyan? - His grin didn't disappear as he said it, that aura even increasing in size somewhat in response. He blurred, reappearing in front of him as bare feet settled into the grass, which was being pushed down by his aura. - What is that? What you type call yourself that live on Chikyuu-sei? Tch. - He stanced slowly, that aura finally disappearing as he grinned at his opponent. - Come on, make a move. I want to see a Saiyan with a Taiken in action. - Glacier hues studied his stance, his demeanor, the sweat on his brow, how his hands tightened on the hilt, the type of ki he used and it's own rhythem. He was calm. It only made him more eager to start the fight. But he had his manners. For now. -

"No. Len-Saiyan, born and raised on Bejiita-sei, just like any other prideful warrior from that planet." Lime countered again, part of his sword still visible to the other. Knowing that he was challenged, the red-haired saiyan curled his tail around his waist, answering the blue-eyed saiyan that he did accept. "Let's see then, what you can do against a saiyan with a Nodachi on his hands." By finishing his sentence, Lime stepped back, stopping the ki flow as he drew his sword out of his scabbard, preparing the first blow, Shikkake position, a basic movement from over his frame and making the sword fall over the other's body, like if he was going to strike one of his shoulders.

NOTE: THIS IS A RP LOG OF MINE. THE PARTS WRITTEN ON ITALICS WERE MY POSTS.


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PostSubject: Re: Saiyajin Yuuki Lime   Sat Aug 07, 2010 6:42 pm

I can't tell you how much I enjoyed reading Lime's bio. Utterly fantastic and his character type (the cool Samurai) is one that we don't really have in this game, so he'll make a truly excellent addition. I can't wait to start roleplaying with Lime, though I have no idea how he'll react to Saku or Jeice, who could not be more different to him (though Saku is a few levels higher on the ladder of intelligence XD).
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PostSubject: Re: Saiyajin Yuuki Lime   Sat Aug 07, 2010 6:53 pm

Hi Lime! I admit I'm impressed. For someone with english as a second language, you've done up quite the bio here. I've got a few suggestions for improvements.

-Ingame, we're going to call them Saiyans. I notice that you've used both Saiyan and Saiyajinn.

-I think you referenced Onion as King Vegeta's...brother? I'd ask that you edit this, if only because-using the ingame setup we have- it would require a quick rewrite and edit of both your profile AND mine, since my character Caithion is the current King Vegeta's cousin, and this would make him and Lime cousins. That's if we're even talking about the same Vegeta. (don't you love timelines?)

-We need a little more of Lime's history in reference to when he was born and where he trained. In the DOF timeline, there has been a period of forty eight years wherein the Saiyans existed on New Vegeta. They didn't contact humans until a few years in. If the Len Saiyans were developed on New Vegeta, as would make sense, then we need to know a little more about how Lime made it to earth and became embroiled in the rebellion- the humans and Saiyans made contact five years after New Vegeta was established.

A few things that don't gel with our current Saiyan culture are prevalent in your bio. For example, the treatment of Len saiyans as second class citizens. That wouldn't happen, because the Saiyans just lost their homeworld and have revenge on their minds. A series of experiments that were meant to increase a warrior's strength would probably be regarded with favor, at least by a good portion of the population. The naming alterations, however, are really brilliant and I applaud you for them.

As for help with occupations- I'm personally interested in how Lime develops, because I think he and my OC Caithion would often be working together. Since Caithion is the supreme commander of the Saiyan army, and Lime is a saiyan warrior, I feel like he would be a trusted captain or sub-commander. I'd love to PM you about maybe RPing a little bit of that in the rebellion thread.


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PostSubject: Re: Saiyajin Yuuki Lime   Sun Aug 08, 2010 6:37 pm

I am so glad that you're good with what I wrote so far. I changed the information you pointed, and I am really looking to see my character approved for start RPing! ^^
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PostSubject: Re: Saiyajin Yuuki Lime   Mon Aug 09, 2010 4:12 pm

Alright, the edits are good and Lime has been

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for regular RP play, which means you can now show up in any of the new player RP boards. Please note that you have to be personally invited to name quest by a senior member. Congrats and welcome to Duel of Fates!
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PostSubject: Re: Saiyajin Yuuki Lime   Mon Aug 09, 2010 10:07 pm

Awesomesauce. Thanks!
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