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PostSubject: Jessie Eartha Shields   Mon Jun 04, 2012 10:54 am

Name: Jessie Eartha Shields
Nickname (if applicable): Jess and Eartha
Age: 15

Species: Saiyan and Human and Vampire and Shape Shifter and Lunarian

Home planet:Earth

Family: Gaia Shields, Henry Shields, and Lita Shields

Eyes: blue when a baby, golden brown and red now

Height: 5’ 11”

General Appearance: Has strawberry blond hair, freckles, mom’s eye shape, dad’s eye color as a child, and vampire fangs.
Power Level: 20,000,000 in normal form and 200,000,000 in non normal form.

Abilities: Super Speed, Ki user, Sailor Scout Transformation, and Princess Transformation.

Weapon of Choice: Frying Pan of Doom

Occupation: Still in school! She likes to help out Bulma at Capsule Corporation and she likes to build robots that can sing and fight. So she actually builds androids. The androids she builds aren’t evil. They are on the Z fighters side.

Personality: Nice, Peaceful, Quiet, Daring, Happy go lucky, Strong willed, and Funny.

History: Both of her parents have died and her foster father died in attack on the twin towers. She was sent to the Dragon Ball Z world when she was 8 years old. She visits every once and a while. She is friends with Goten and Trunks. She lives with the Son family when she visits. She has many secrets that she doesn’t want anyone to know. Like one was she has a curse that changes her into a boy.

Love Life/Relationships: She is dating our favorite lavender haired friend. (Thank God =^.^=)

Random Information: She is a very good person. She is totally awesome. She is very good in school. She is a freshman in high school and she doesn’t like to hide her powers from everyone. She likes to be the best student in the class. She is a high honors student. She is very smart when she wants to be smart. She and her sister watched their parents get murdered in front of their very eyes.

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PostSubject: Re: Jessie Eartha Shields   Tue Jun 05, 2012 6:27 pm

Having read your OC submission, I'm not entirely convinced you've read anything about this RPG, the universe it takes place in, or the characters involved. First off, there technically is no Capsule Corps. any more, considering the fact that there is no Earth any more. Even if there were a DBZ earth, the Twin Towers could never have existed. DBZ!Earth is not the same as every day earth. Speaking of that particular historical plot point of your character, I find it surprising her personality is pretty happy-go-lucky and upbeat, considering her fairly horrific past. Shouldn't she be a bit more, er, emotionally scarred? I sure as hell would be. XD

As for her love life, I'm afraid Trunks is already being played by another user here. It is up to the player of the character to decide who he/she dates within the game.

We really couldn't accept a character with such a high power level either. All characters must start out with a power level of 5000 or below (preferably below). Remember this is a game based on the Namek Saga - the ability to turn Super Saiyan hasn't been discovered yet and Frieza continues to be the strongest power in the known galaxy. This game really isn't an opportunity for players to show off how strong or "awesome" their characters are. It's more an opportunity to engage in a really interesting story writing experience.

I'd recommend you take a look at the site [You must be registered and logged in to see this link.], [You must be registered and logged in to see this link.] and take a look at one of the current active character's biographies: [You must be registered and logged in to see this link.]

Thank you very much for your submission. Please don't feel disheartened by our critique. Practise makes perfect and everyone's got to start somewhere ^_^
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PostSubject: Jessie Eartha Shields   Thu Jun 07, 2012 6:04 am

Jessie comes into the DBZ universe when she is eight so she is from a different deminsion where Earth exists. She protects both dimensions she lives in. Very Happy Very Happy
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